First off, that's a BIG collage. I've never seen anything like this, really. The voiceover follows the collage in an interesting way. I really like the tension in the voice around 1:03. Some criticism: I think perhaps it goes on a bit long before the voiceover starts. The jerky framerate at the beginning gives a bit of a cheap flavor to an otherwise amazing project. Since the part with the low framerate at the beginning is the first thing the viewer sees, it might have people clicking off of it before it really gets going. I might more slowly taper off the ambient sound at the beginning so that it's barely audible by the time the voiceover starts. As is, there's a clumsy feel to the transition between the noise and the voiceover's start. All in all, I did really like the originality of this and the script was wonderful!

Very fun with lotsa stuff going on! Great pacing and well-planned edits. I wonder how long this took to make. The digital art on your website is awesome as well :)